HorrorPunkOtaku's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[r a i n]

this is good, If you clean up your lines and work a bit more on the shading you could really make this pop.

[Felix and Betty]

Culd've put more detail into Felix(put more shades in, rounded out the bottom of his right eye)but other than that good.

StevRayBro responds:

Thanks for the feedback, I spent maybe 3 and half hours on this total. Didn't even noticed Felix's eye. Thanks again!

[Crab Sonoshee]

clean lines, good color, shading, anatomy. As for design I feel this could've had more going for it. Hope this was helpful.

[Pegasi Feathers of Black]

Overall this is good but you could try to do some cleaner lines and focus a tad more on anatomy (I'm aware this is chibi, praportions are not the issue here). Hope this was helpfull.

[Alexis Pose]

This is brilliant! This kind of stialized realism is very appealing. Even without a backdrop it sets a mood. I know you said you weren't comfortable revealing any of the story but the one thing holding this back is a lack of scenery. Even a pattern that fits the mood or leans toward the mood intended would really make this pop.